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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. ​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. ​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The depicted bar chart illustrates the distribution of male and female teachers in six separate teaching environments in the United Kingdom in 2010.
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,
women
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 dominate the lower years of
education
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, lowering in representation as the educational settings increase in average
age
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 of
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. The only time men largely exceed
women
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 in representation is at the university level, with an
upwards
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upward
 trend as the average
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 increases. During nursery and pre-school, we see the highest proportion of teachers being female. We
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 see an enormous
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 of female teachers in primary school. There is a massive underrepresentation of men in the two earliest levels of
education
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.
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, only at the university level
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 do we see the educational setting be largely male-predominated. Yet, even at
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 level,
women
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 make up a large portion of the
work force
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workforce
. We see a general
upwards
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 trend for male involvement in
education
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 as the
age
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 of students increases. Meanwhile, we can see a decrease in the percentage of
women
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 involved in the respective
education
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 settings
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 as the
age
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 of students increases. In secondary schools, colleges, and private training institutes, the distribution of men and
women
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 teaching is nearly equal.
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 is where the trends plateau, before continuing to increase and decrease, for male and female teaching staff, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, education, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Distribution
  • Gender disparities
  • Educational settings
  • Predominance
  • Representation
  • Societal biases
  • Systemic biases
  • Recruitment
  • Accessibility
  • Work-life balance
  • Societal expectations
  • Perceived suitability
  • Efforts to balance
  • Gender equality
  • Policymakers
  • Educational leaders
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