The map show the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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map of the centre of Paris displays two possible locations for a new restaurant to open.

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2 is much more likely to be visited than

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1, but the latter is in a more secluded spot.

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, the first proposed store placement

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only has the maritime museum in close proximity, which receives 8,000

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per day. Meanwhile, the second proposed store placement is between the Eiffel Tower, which sees 16,000

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daily, and the art gallery of Paris, which sees 750

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daily. Both stores are equidistant to the aquarium and sports centre, which receive 2,000 and 500

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each day, respectively.

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more likely to be popular, and

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1 will probably have a quieter atmosphere. Both stores are located near parks. They are relatively close to the waterfront of the River Seine, and both are decently close to the Bir Hakeim metro station. The first shop is placed in the northwest side of the city, near the north end of the Bir Hakeim Bridge,

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the second shop is situated in the southeast of Paris, near the south end of the Lena Bridge.