The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

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The diagrams provided

displays

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the life cycle of a

ladybird

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as well as

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its anatomy. The life cycle of a

ladybird

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appears to be a multi-stage, linear process beginning with the egg stage and ending with its full development.

Firstly

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, larvae

eggs

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lay eggs

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are laid

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apply

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, preferably on a leaf. It takes about 48-120 hours

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for it to progress to a larval stage where it remains dormant for 3 weeks. The pupa stage comes

next,

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occurring for a week, and

this

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happens

while

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it is still on the leaf for support and nourishment.

Finally

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, on the 8th day, it blossoms into a mature

ladybird

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with various functional features. Its head consists of

antenna

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an antenna

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and

eye

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an eye

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, and below the pronotum. The pronotum acts as an anchor for the head

connects

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, connecting

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the rest of the body with it. As we see, the lower limbs

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are

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comprised of the leg and red elytra. Underneath the latter are the wings (for locomotion) and

dual-shade

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the dual-shade

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abdomen of the

ladybird

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Jun 27, 2026

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

metamorphosis
pupal stage
larva
elytra (wing covers)
anatomy
compound eyes
antennae
egg stage
adult ladybird
hatch
voracious eaters
shedding skin
infested
habitat
protective features

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The ınternet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both this views and give your opinion.

In developed countries, more and more people buy and use their cars. Do the advantages for people of cars using outweight its disadvantages on environment.

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Some people think the government should not spend on international aid because there are disadvantaged people in their countries, such as the unemployed and homeless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?