The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The maps
provides
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provide
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key information about the changes in
university
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sports courts between 1990 and now.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the
university
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has a significant
devolmpent
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development
and they
enlarging
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are enlarging
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spaces
,
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. In
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in addition
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, in 1990, the pool was outdoor,
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now indoor pool . 
Accourding
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According
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to what is shown, in 1990, the
university
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had a
park
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, a car
park
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,
and
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apply
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a small tennis court
and
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, and
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also
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apply
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a small changing room
,
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;
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the
university
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appeared small and less developed . In terms of now, the
park
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was replaced by
basketball
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a basketball
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court and the car
park
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replaced by a bigger tennis court and
added a a fitness centre
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a fitness centre was added
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words university, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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