Write a Letter to A Friend Who Just Moved Into a New House to Which You Are Sending a Gift. In your Letter What Is the Gift? Why Did You Choose It? How It Will Be Delivered?

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Dear David, I hope

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letter finds you well and that you are settling into your new place comfortably! I was absolutely thrilled to hear that you have officially moved into your new home, and I want to send you my warmest congratulations on

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exciting milestone. To celebrate your new chapter, I have prepared a special housewarming present for you: a custom-made

Personalized Watercolor

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Personalised Watercolour

House Portrait from your

favorite

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online art gallery

House

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Warming Gift Portrait on Etsy. I chose

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gift because I know how much time, effort, and heart you put into finding the perfect place. A custom painting of the home’s facade will add a beautiful, personal, and

cozy

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touch to your living room or entryway. It is the perfect keepsake to commemorate

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wonderful achievement. I have arranged for the artwork to be safely delivered directly to your doorstep. It will be shipped via FedEx Express Delivery by Tuesday morning, so please keep an eye out for a packaged

flat-box

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. I can't wait to visit and see the space in person once you have all the boxes unpacked. Let's catch up soon! Warmly, James.

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Jun 28, 2026

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Task response: You answer all 3 parts, but you can add one more small detail about the gift to make it fuller.

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Task response: The tone is warm and friendly. Try to keep all words simple and natural.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is clear and easy to follow from start to end.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Each part has one main idea, but one long gift name makes the flow less smooth.

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Task response: You clearly say what the gift is, why you chose it, and how it will arrive.

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Task response: The friendly tone fits a letter to a friend very well.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The opening, body, and ending are in a good order.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your link words like 'because' and 'so' help the ideas connect well.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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