The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following graph illustrates the average emissions of CO2 for one person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.

Overall

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, the carbon dioxide emissions in the UK and Sweden tend to decrease.

In contrast

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, in Italy and Portugal, it

is stably increase

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has been steadily increasing

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. We can see United Kingdom, from over ten tonnes in

1967

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1967,

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there are only over 8 tonnes in 2007. About Sweden, the drop of CO2 emissions

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from

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1977 to 2007

make

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makes

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Sweden

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apply

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one of the lowest countries

which emiss

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with

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CO2

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emissions in

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2007. On the other

hands

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hand

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, Italy and Portugal

are

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apply

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both

increase

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increased

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from 1967 to 2007.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

100 words

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