The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

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The table provides information about underground railways in six cities ,including how many people use them every year ,the distance and the opening date.

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, London is the oldest and longest. Tokyo has the most

passengers

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. Kyoto and Los Angeles are the smallest. London opened in 1863. It is 394

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long and has 775

million

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passengers

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. Paris opened in 1900. It has 199

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of track. Tokyo opened later in 1927. It is only 155

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long, but it has the most

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, with 1,928

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people using it every year. Washington DC opened in 1976. It has 126

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and 144

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passengers

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. The other two cities are much smaller. Kyoto opened in 1981. It has only 11

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and 45

million

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passengers

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. Los Angeles is the newest one. It opened in 2001. It has 28

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and 50

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passengers

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is a bit more than Kyoto.

munvinder1265

Jul 8, 2026

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Topic Vocabulary:

underground railway system
chronologically
significance
correlation
discrepancies
outliers
extensive network
limited network
urban sprawl
efficiency
hypothesize
passenger numbers
kilometres of route
date opened
major cities
data analysis
comparative analysis
historical context
speculate
potential causes

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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.