5.Some people think that governments should ban unhealthy food to improve public health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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5.Some people think that governments should ban unhealthy food to improve public health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some individuals are of the claim that UNHEALTHY FOOD SHOULD BE FORBIDDEN TO ENHANCE popular health. I
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Write more. Your answer is too short, so your ideas are not fully shown.
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State your opinion in a clear way. For example, say why you partly disagree.
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Add main points and explain each one with a simple reason or example.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear links between ideas, like first, also, however, and in conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Make one full introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Check spacing and word form, for example partly disagree, not partlydisagree.
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You answered the topic and gave your opinion.
coherence and cohesion
You wrote an introduction sentence.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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