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Band 2.5

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table illustrates
about
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the
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sale
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sales
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 of trade
products
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products,
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that is
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which are
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coffee
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 and
bananas
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in
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, in
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 five
Eureopean
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European
 countries between the
year
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years
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 1999 and 2004. From the table, we can see that
coffee
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sale
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 has risen in almost all
the
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apply
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five countries
comparing
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compared
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 to 1999.
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,
bananas
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sale
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 is fluctuated in
these
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recent
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 years in the respective countries.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that
coffee
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sale
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 is boosted in
Eureopean
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European
 nations
comparing
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compared
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 to the past.The most remarkable
sale
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 was observed in
UK
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the UK
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here
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, where
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 the
sale
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is
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has
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 increased almost
20 folds
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20-fold
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Similarly
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 in switzerland
sale
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 was
also
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 doubled
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compared
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 to
previous
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the previous
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 figure. But, in Belgium and
Sweden
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Sweden,
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 only a slight increase in
sales
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 was reported. Keeping in view the
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bananas
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banana sales
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sale
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 in these
states
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states,
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 reults are varrying.In Uk
bananas
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sale
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 saw a surge.
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However
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 in the
states
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 Denmark reported a noticeable decline in
sales
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 possibliy
due to
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loss
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a loss
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 of
people
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people's
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 inclination towards it.
Hence
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, we can document that
comparing
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compared
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 to
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bananas
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bananas,
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coffee
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 represented high
sales
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 values as
that
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in past .
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, at the same time
sales
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 of
bananas
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continues
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continue
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 to
oscilliate
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oscillate
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 among these states

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task response
Write the main view more clearly in the first part.
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Report the key changes for both coffee and bananas in all five countries.
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Use more exact data or key comparisons, not only general words like big or small.
coherence and cohesion
Group ideas better. Put all coffee points together and all banana points together.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with simple words like overall, while, however, and in contrast.
coherence and cohesion
Make each sentence easy to follow. Some sentences are too long or not clear.
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You give an overall view of coffee and bananas sales.
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You mention some important comparisons, such as the UK and Switzerland.
coherence and cohesion
The essay has a clear start, middle, and end.
coherence and cohesion
You use paragraphing to separate main ideas.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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