Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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today relates to environmental

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problem

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problems

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some ppl tend towards the viewpoint that environmental

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is mainly about

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the elimination

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plants

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and

animals

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,

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support

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there are other problems is more important.  I will demonstrate both points of view and

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 my opinion. On

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side of the

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there are people who argue that

animals

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and

plants

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are eliminate

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is the

majority

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major environmental problem

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problem

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of environment, the main reason for believing

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is that

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the loss

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of

plants

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and

animals

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will influence the production of grain. To be more specific, it is

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possible to say that the

disappear

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disappearance

of

plants

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and

animals

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will break the food chain of

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nature

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good example is that the

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disappearance

of bees will damage of coin’s production

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, the opposite argument is

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climate change will influence

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apply

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environmental change, or

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thing, the globalwarming damage plenty of

plants

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,

animals

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and

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etc.  To illustrate, many polo bear are

loss

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losing

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their habitat in

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the polar

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regions.

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For another, the fact that industrial

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pollution will damage

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the environment

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in the same way

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deserves our attention.

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, the pollution of

water

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pollutes human

water

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sources,

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it reduces the drinkable

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. In conclusion,

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it might seem sensible for the majority of

problem

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plants

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and

animals

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are

been loss

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lost

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, I personally prefer

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others are more important to

environment

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environmental

problems.