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The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

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The depicted pie chart
compare
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 the rates of
water
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 usage for three functions and six different regions worldwide.
Overall
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, applying more
water
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 towards agricultural purposes is the most common in the world, except for North
America
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 and Europe, where the amount of
water
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 set aside for industrial use is higher than
any
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for any
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 other
applications
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application
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. In Africa,
central
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Central
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 and
South East
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Southeast
 Asia, more than 80% of
water
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 is used in farming. Meanwhile, the use of
water
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 for domestic purposes in central and South East Asia was 7%
and
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 in Africa it was 9%.
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, the consumption of
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 in
industrial
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the industrial
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area
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areas
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 of South
America
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 and
South East
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Southeast
 Asia had a similar trend. From the six different continents,
the
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most of the allocated
water
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 was used for manufacturing in Europe and North
America
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.
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,
North
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in North
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America
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almost
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, almost
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 half of the
regions
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region's
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water
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 is allocated for industrial uses.
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, 1/3 of Europe's
water
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 is set for
this
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 purpose. Agricultural use comes in second in these regions,
while
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 domestic is the
last
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 with less than.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
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