The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in the total energy supply in four countries from 1997 to 2010.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of total energy supplied by renewable sources in

Australia

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Sweden

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, Iceland and Turkey in 1997, 2000 and 2010.

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, Iceland had by far the highest proportion

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its figure experienced a considerable increase over the period.

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declined steadily,

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increased slightly; meanwhile, Turkey rose

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before declining. In 1997, renewable sources accounted for approximately 46% of Iceland’s total energy supply.

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figure rose significantly to 60% in 2000 before reaching 70% in 2010. Turkey,

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, started at around 38% and increased marginally to 41% in 2000, after which it fell to approximately 33% in 2010. The figures for

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and

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were considerably lower. In

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, the proportion fell consistently from approximately 9% in 1997 to 7% in 2000 and

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to 5% in 2010.

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's figure followed the opposite trend, rising from around 6% to 9% over the period.

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