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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

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The line graph illustrates the amount of
air
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pollutants
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 produced by four different Sources ( transport, Industry, total
air
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pollutants
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 and household) in the UK between 1990 and 2005.Units are measured in
million
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 tonnes.
Overall
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, it is evident that all of the sources of
air
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pollutants
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 decreased over the period
except
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, except
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 the transport
which
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, which
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 increased slightly.
Furthermore
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, total
air
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pollutants
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 recorded the highest figures,
whereas
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 the households had the lowest figures. Moving to details, total
air
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pollutants
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was
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 higher than the industry , reaching a peak at around 7
million
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 in 1990.
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, it witnessed a significant decline from around 7
million
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 in 1990 to about 3
million
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 in 2005. The industry accounted for 3
million
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 in 1996 after falling from nearly 5.5
million
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 to 2
million
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.
On the other hand
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, the lowest source was in the family's consumption
which
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, which
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 decreased from 1
million
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 to 0.2
million
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 approximately.
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, the transport experienced a gradual growth from almost 0.2
million
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 to above 1.5
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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