The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Get started →
The maps illustrate the current layout of an office building and the proposed reorganisation plan for the future.
Overall
Linking Words
, the office is planned to include several new facilities
such
Linking Words
as an outdoor seating
area
Use synonyms
, a coffee machine and a meeting
area
Use synonyms
. Meanwhile, the kitchen and
canteen
Use synonyms
will be completely removed, and the existing offices will be rearranged. At present, the kitchen,
canteen
Use synonyms
and storeroom are arranged along the northern side of the building,
while
Linking Words
four separate offices occupy the southern-central section. The WCs are located to the east of the
canteen
Use synonyms
, close to the storeroom. There are
also
Linking Words
grass areas on both the eastern and western sides of the building. In terms of access, entrances are provided on the western side and near the south-eastern corner. Under the proposed plan, the kitchen and
canteen
Use synonyms
will be removed,
while
Linking Words
the four offices will be rearranged around the building. The western grass
area
Use synonyms
will be replaced by an outdoor seating
area
Use synonyms
,
whereas
Linking Words
a meeting
area
Use synonyms
with chairs will occupy the south-eastern corner. A coffee machine will
also
Linking Words
be installed near the WCs on the eastern side. The storeroom will remain in the northern section, and access will continue to be provided through western and southern entrances.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, canteen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • map
  • present
  • future
  • plan
  • building
  • post office
  • area
  • space
  • room
  • entrance
  • exit
  • door
  • window
  • car park
  • parking
  • yard
  • road
  • path
  • sign
  • counter
  • desk
  • staff
  • customer
  • service
  • work
  • time
  • crowd
  • line
  • bigger
  • new
  • old
  • safe
  • easy
  • clear
  • open
  • bright
  • design
  • build
  • change
  • improve
  • add
  • extend
  • phase
  • cost
  • traffic
  • noise
  • safety
  • access
  • people
  • move
  • area
What to do next:
Look at other essays: