Some people think all lawbreakers should be sent to prison, while others think there are better alternatives for those whose crimes are minor, such as making them do work for the local community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A number of

people

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suggest that all lawbreakers indifferent of the

level

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of the

crime

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commited should be sent to prison,

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others propose the idea that the

people

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who proceed to commit minor crimes

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to

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should

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be included in the work for the local community

instead

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of being imprisoned.

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both opinions have their pros and cons,

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am inclined to agree fully with the second opinion.

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, it would be morally wrong to condemn all

people

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indifferent

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regardless

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of the

level

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of the

crime

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proceeded

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to prison without giving them the chance to progress and understand their wrongdoings so they wouldn't repeat the same mistake again. I think if the

crime

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is something that didn`t represent a great danger to society,

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the citizen should be given another chance with probation.

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, if they

would

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go down the same path again,

then

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it should be proposed a prison sentence

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a prison sentence should be proposed

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.

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, if a youngster

proceedes

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proceeds

to do graffiti in an

unathorised

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unauthorised

place, he shouldn`t be convicted the same as a robber. Owing to the fact that their intentions are completely different and one represents an utmost risk to other

peoples

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people's lives

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life

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life,

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whereas

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one

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the other

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is simply curiosity or

rebbelion

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rebellion

.

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,

i

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I

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highly agree with the opinion that minor crimes should be punished by an inclusion of the wrongdoer in

activites

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activities

that contribute to the states wellbeing,

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as

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apply

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cleaning green spaces, side roads, helping senior citizens

etc

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, etc

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.

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of including

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low-grade

lawbreakers into daily work for the state, more hardworking

people

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would arise.

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, by working for the local community, they would learn what it means to have a civic sense and how important it is

respect

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to respect

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the rules

as

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so as

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to not

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not to

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create any

unecessary incoviniences

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unnecessary inconveniences

for them or for others.

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, wrongdoers would gain a civic spirit and would feel how important it is to contribute and to receive a

right

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just

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reward for

your

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their

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work.

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, they will own up to the fact done by them and try to change their mode of manifestation. In conclusion, lawbreakers should be given second chances

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the

level

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of the

crime

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commited

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committed

and not be mixed up with

high

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high-level

level

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criminals.

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, if the

crime

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commited

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committed

doesn`t have an impact on the life of others and the

wellbeing

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well-being

of the state, it shouldn`t

pe

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be

punished too

bruttaly

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brutally

,

such

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as

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apply

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with sudden imprisonment.