IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3

The Chart below gives information about the percentage of people having COVID-19 symptoms. Summarize the information by adding and reporting the main features, and make relevant comparisons where relevant.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Write on this topic →
The given pie chart reflects that
,
Punctuation problem
apply
show examples
 different sources of
information
Use synonyms
 about COVID-19.
Overall
Linking Words
, as provided
as
Change preposition
in
show examples
 a census
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
 perusal, the given illustration provides some
information
Use synonyms
. TV is manifested as dominent source.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, family and freinds is minusculely contributed for sharing
information
Use synonyms
 about COVID-19. As can be observed in the given illustration, TV is
dominated
Replace the word
the dominant medium
 with the highest figure with 90.2%. The opposite scenario can be observed
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
,
the
Correct word choice
where the
show examples
information
Use synonyms
 comes from family and friends
is
Correct pronoun usage
, which is
show examples
 vanishingly small
2.7
Punctuation problem
, 2.7
show examples
%. Newspaper is distinctly marked as the second highest
sources
Fix the agreement mistake
source
show examples
 with 49.7%
which
Punctuation problem
, which
show examples
 is simply followed by a proportion of hospital or primary care clinics with 39.8%. It is crystal clear that
,
Punctuation problem
apply
show examples
 33.8% of
contribution
Correct article usage
the contribution
show examples
 is given by radio
which
Punctuation problem
, which
show examples
 is marginally higher than internet and sharing on
messagin
Correct your spelling
messaging
 apps
which
Punctuation problem
, which
show examples
 represent 26% and 22.9% respectively
and
Punctuation problem
, and
show examples
 it is substantially superior
than
Change preposition
to
show examples
 that of posters/ leaflets with 5.5%

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words information with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: