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The line graph shows the amount of goods transported by four transport modes in the UK between 1974 and 2002.

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The line graph compares the amount of goods transported in the United Kingdom by four different modes of
transport
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 between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
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, apply road transportation increased throughout the given period and was the most common method. Water
transport
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also
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 showed a rise despite some fluctuations,
whereas
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 pipeline
transport
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 rose
steadly
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steadily
 before levelling off.
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, rail
transport
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after
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 a light increase, the amount declined considerably in the final years. Rail
transport
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 began at around 40
million
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tonnes
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.
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 it fell to about 30
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985. It grew steadily before declining again in 1994 to 24
million
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tonnes
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. After that, the figure increased slightly and reached over 40
million
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tonnes
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 by the end of the period. Meanwhile, pipeline
transport
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 carried the smallest amount of goods over the given period. It rose from about 4
million
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tonnes
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 in 1947 to around 22
million
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tonnes
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 in 1994 and did not
groe
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grow
 until the end
2002
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of 2002
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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