The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in U.K. from 2001 to 2008.

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The bar chart gives information on the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables daily in the UK from 2001 to 2008, expressed in percentages.
Overall
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, it is evident that women accounted for the largest proportion throughout the period, followed by men.
By contrast
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, children registered the smallest proportion between 2001 and 2008. In 2001, women represented the highest share at around 22.5%,
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roughly 17.5%.
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, children showed the lowest share at about 12.5%. Over the period, the proportion of women significantly increased and peaked at 35% in 2006 before reducing to 30% in 2008.
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, the share of men remained stable at about 17.5% until 2003, and
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rose gradually to about 27.5% in 2006, remaining unchanged until 2007. Afterwards, it slightly declined to 26%
at the end
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of the period.
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, the percentage of children stood at around 17.5% between 2001 and 2003 and
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grew considerably to approximately 27% in 2007 before decreasing to around 24% by 2008.

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