The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph depicts the
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of graduating
individuals
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of both genders from universities across Canada from 1992 to 2007.
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, both genders experienced fluctuations in the
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of
graduates
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over the years.
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, female
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outnumbered their male counterparts. In the first year, 1992, female
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were on the increase until 1996, when the figure began at around 100000 people in
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to roughly over 120 and exceeded that landmark by 1996.
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was true for the opposite sex; the
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of male
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started at 70000 and climbed up to more than 90000
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. After 1996, both genders saw a slight decline in the
number
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of university
graduates
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, with 100000 and 90000 participants, respectively. Turning to 2000 to 2006, and regarding males category, the
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of male
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recorded a slight decline and reached approximately 72000 participants.
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figure
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rose and reached the middle of the data
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range of 90000 to 100000
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.
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,
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, females category experienced a different trend; the
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of female
graduates
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stayed elevated immediately with no alteration except a slight decline and almost achieved 150000
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by the end of 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, individuals, graduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • general trend
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • dips
  • significant differences
  • increase/decrease
  • comparison
  • data
  • period
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
  • cultural shifts
  • implications
  • workforce
  • economy
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