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The charts below show the reasons of students to study a particular in a UK university in the year 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The pie charts display why students want to study in specfic university in
UK
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the UK
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 in
two
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 years
1987
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, 1987
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 and 2007.
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, in both years
the
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, the
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two
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 reasons
the
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are the
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 quality of resources and the suitable
dgree
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degree
 courses
are the highest
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apply
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.
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,
while
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 the
reason
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of
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for
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 good sports and social activities was the
thired bigest
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third biggest
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 in 1987,
this
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 changed in 2007 and became the lowest
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. The suitable
dgree
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degree
 courses
reason
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 in1987 was the highest
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, with
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 almost above the thired and
increaced
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increased
 in 2007 with
two
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 degrees.
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 the quality of resources was the second
bigest
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biggest
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 in 1987 with
approximitally
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approximately
,it decreased to 17% in
2007
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2007,
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 yet it
still
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is still
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 the second in the reasons
oreder
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ordered
 in 2007. Since the good sports and social activities
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 was the
thired
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third
 top
reason
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 in
1987
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1987,
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 with almost the fifth,it
droped sharpely
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dropped sharply
 in 2007 and became the
last
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reason
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 with about 6% of the total.The
two
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 other reasons
quality
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, quality
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 of teaching and
proximitly
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proximity
 to
prental
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prenatal
home
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home,
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 were both increased in 2007 with 18% and 22% respectivly .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, reason with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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