the chart below shows Japan's population by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040

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The graph illustrate compares
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by age group in Japan between 1960 and looks ahead to 2040
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, it is clear that the young generation and adults experienced a gradual decrease with some
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the older people category witnesed steadly increase , and adition it recorded the highest figure for most of the period. Looking first at the young generation until the age of 14 was started with 30 %
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in 1960and minor increase to around 35 % in 1970.
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declined considerably to just under 30 in 1980 and continued to decrease with minor fluctuation until the reach of 10 % with some forecast data. A relatively similar trend can be observed in the
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64. It started 65 %
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rate in 1960 , and it recorded the same result in 2010. After that, it experienced a levelling off considerably and predicted that contionue until 55 % in 2040. Turning to elderly people aged over 65
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starting point was about 5%
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in 1960 and never changed until 1970. After that, its rate increased dramatically until
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with 30 %
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it predicted that it will remain unchanged till 2030,
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go up to 35% in 2040.

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