The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of times

people

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USA

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the USA

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ate in fast

food

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restaurants in the

years

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2003, 2006 and 2013. The frequency is measured by percentage.

Overall

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, most

people

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prefer to eat in fast

food

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restaurants once a week among the three

years

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while

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the least proportion of

people

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was

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were

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eating

everyday

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every day

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According to

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the chart, less than 5% of

people

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eat fast

food

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everday which is indicated to be the least among the other figures.

In contrast

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people

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eating fast

food

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once a week reached approximately 33% in

the

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apply

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2006

which

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, which

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is twice as much as eating several times a week in the year 2013.

However

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people

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eating a few times a year were about 15% in the

years

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2006 and 2013,

while

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in 2013 were nearly 12%. It is

also

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show

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shown

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that

people

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who have never eaten in fast

food

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restaurants were just around 5% as maximum over the three distinct

years

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which

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, which

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is similar to the average

precentage

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percentage

people

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eating everyday even though their

opposity

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opposites

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fast food consumption
decade
trend analysis
frequently, occasionally, and rarely
significant changes
lifestyle modifications
health awareness
economic factors
public health implications
fast food industry
broader implications

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