The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009.

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This
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bar graph shows the global
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sales
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of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009 in three different countries.
This
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chart clearly shows that in only three years
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sales
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of hybrid
cars
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have doubled. In 2006 360'000
cars
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were sold
and
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, and
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in
2009
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2009,
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already 740'000 in total. Especially in
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Japan,
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the
sales
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of hybrid
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have been growing exponentially in 2009 alone. In the US,
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, in 2006 and
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2007,
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more people purchased hybrid
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and
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in 2008 and
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2009,
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the
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became more stagnant. In Japan and the
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US,
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the use of hybrid
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is already more common,
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in all the other
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countries,
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the bar graph illustrates that
sales
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are slowly growing in the rest of the world but have not reached the same popularity yet. In conclusion,
this
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chart illustrates that hybrid vehicles are trending and more people
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are investing
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in new technologies and are caring about the environment.

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