The maps below show the main road in Farmshire village and development plans for 2024.

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The maps illustrate the plan of change for the main road in

farmshire

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Farmshire

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village in 2024. In general, more facilities will be built

but

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, but

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small parts will be demolished. To be detailed, it starts from the farms section.

Currently

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Currently,

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it has 3 farms, but later it will be 2 farms and 1 poultry farm. Moving to

northeast

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the northeast

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woods

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the woods

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or the little forest will be replaced by a community soccer field

adding

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the

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public facility to the area. Stepping down to the

south east

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southeast

, there will be no change for the prayer

center

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centre

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and cooperative bank.

However

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, a supermarket will be built nearby. Turning to the southwest area, an employment assistance building will be constructed

replacing

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, replacing

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the location for the village store

with

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, and

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a few trees will be torn down

for getting

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to get

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larger spaces.

However

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, some trees will be planted in the farm areas. With the changes, the zone will have more public facilities that are more beneficial for the community.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

160 words

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The maps below show the main road in Farmshire village and development plans for 2024.

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