The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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The bar chart illustrates
illiteracy
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rates
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across six different regions, for both males and females, for the year 2000.
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, literacy
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varied drastically by region, with the lowest numbers recorded in the more developed countries,
while
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the Arab states and South
Asia
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recorded the highest.
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, we can notice that in each region, male
illiteracy
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rates
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were noticeably lower than female. Looking at the regions with the lowest
illiteracy
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, Developed Countries recorded the lowest for both genders, 1% for males and 2% for females. In Latin America/Caribbean and East
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/Oceania,
rates
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were slightly higher, males recorded 10% in Latin America and 8% in East
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,
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female
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reached 12% and 20% respectively.
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, the remaining regions faced higher
illiteracy
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rates
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. In Sub-Saharan Africa, male
rates
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reached just over 30%
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the females a little under 50%. The Arab States demonstrate the same gender
illiteracy
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gap, where male
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reached roughly 30% and female
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exceeded 50%.
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, South
Asia
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recorded the highest
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rates
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overall
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, where male
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reached approximately 34% and female
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a staggering 56%.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literacy rates
  • gender gap
  • regional disparities
  • socio-economic factors
  • male literacy
  • female literacy
  • overviews
  • notable differences
  • highest literacy regions
  • moderate literacy regions
  • lowest literacy regions
  • estimated data
  • educational attainment
  • cultural influences
  • development levels
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