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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In
this
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 chart, we can see a representation of categories and satisfaction of
library
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 users, the first feature that we pay attention is the users majority take part of full-time undergraduate and full-time post-graduate,
such
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 as they probably are the biggest data of
library
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 satisfaction, since very satisfied until not satisfied,
also
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 post-graduate
students
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 would need more special materials to hardest researchs and learning method, Even thought undergraduates
students
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, fresh or veteran, are o their initial academic career, both categaries look satisfied with the
library
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 between another may, as the fact they use it more than once during a day.
On the other hand
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, academic staff is the lowest data categorie that use the
library
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, with a
percentage
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 of 17%, the reason beyond
this
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 effect is because the staffs must to focus on their work, so they probally use the
library
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 on their free-time,
however
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, distance learning
students
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 have a 8%
percentage
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, both categaries have a 1% difference
percentage
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, which explain they took a little part of satisfaction research, distance learning have a low
percentage
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 because the fact they
also
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 access online materials.
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, part-time postgraduate
students
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 are the medium date, with a 16%
percentage
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. where they would use the libraray to classroom
researchs
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research
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homeworks
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, students, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library users
  • survey results
  • the chart shows
  • the table gives
  • the largest group
  • the smallest group
  • a high number
  • a low number
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • in general
  • overall
  • by contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • positive view
  • negative view
  • service quality
  • study space
  • opening hours
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