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The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented table demonstrates past and predicted
population
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numbers
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 in Australia, Canada, New Zealand, and the United States in various periods. The units are measured in
numbers
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.
Overall
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, the US surpassed all other countries in terms of total
population
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.
Additionally
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, the projected
population
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 in America by 2050 showed the highest rise in
numbers
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,
whereas
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 other countries are predicted
less
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 substantially.
According to
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 the provided graph, figures in the USA
initially
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 increased by 8
million
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 in 1993, followed by a higher
growth
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 rate, reaching 275
million
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 during 2000.
Thereafter
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, the
numbers
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 witnessed a drastic rise to around 320
million
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, with predictions for growing to approximately 350
million
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.
Moreover
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, residents' statistics in Canada revealed a gradual upward trajectory
1990
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from 1990
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 to 2000,
then
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 rose significantly to roughly 37
million
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 by 2020, with a
forecaste
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forecast
 for a stabilised
growth
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 to 39
million
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 in 2050.
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,
population
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numbers
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 in Australia showed a steady
growth
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 from 17,1 to 22,7
million
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 by 2020, with predictions to exceed 26
million
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 through 2050. New Zealand's
growth
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 rates were negligible in the first decade, followed by a slightly higher increase to 4.3
million
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 in 2020, and reaching a potential
population
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 of 4.7
in
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million in
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 2050.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, numbers, million, growth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population
  • figure
  • rise
  • fall
  • grow
  • drop
  • increase
  • decrease
  • remain
  • change
  • highest
  • lowest
  • large
  • small
  • slight
  • sharp
  • steady
  • overall
  • while
  • by contrast
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