The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
The diagrams illustrate the layout of Stokeford in 1930 and the proposed changes for 2010.
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, the layout became more organised, with more infrastructure being added.
In contrast
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, the farms
completely
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were completely
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removed from the map.
Area
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become underwent more
modern
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modernisation
and
better
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is better
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suited for living purposes. In 1930, the
area
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contained two large farms, with a school and a Lange
house
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with a garden located between them. To the north of the lowest farm were a police station and a couple of small shops. A river ran along the whole
area
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, with a bridge providing access to the territory. By 2010, some changes in the
area
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are
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were
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included. All farms were completely removed
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, and
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the territory for living
become
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became
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more expanded. To the north, shops were
also
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removed and replaced with a new road. The primary school became more expanded, with two new buildings added on each side of it.
Although
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the
area
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of the large
house
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became smaller, the
house
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itself was enlarged
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, and
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the purpose
for
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usage changed. The large
house
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converted
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has been converted
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into
the
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a
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retirement home.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, house with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demolition
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • urbanization
  • land use
  • farmlands
  • notable buildings
  • layout
  • developments
  • economic growth
  • population growth
  • amenities
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • reconstruction
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