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The chart bellow shows the percentage of car trips by purpose and genders in 2015.

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The chart bellow shows the percentage of car trips by purpose and genders in 2015.
The table chart presents the
propotion
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proportion
 of road
trips
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 by intention and
divided
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divides
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women
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 and
men
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 in 2015.
Overall
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, all genders used
car
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a car
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for went
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to go
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 to work.
However
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,
women
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 are
less
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apply
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lower than
man
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men
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. From the
chart
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chart,
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 we can say that
women
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were
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made a
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 high percentage of car
trips
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.
Also
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, the purpose of road
trips
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 between
women
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 and
men
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were
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was
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 very different. The percentage of shopping was 10% and roughly 18% for
men
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 and
women
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, respectively. Visiting
town
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the town
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was only account
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accounted
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 for around 5% for
women
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.
On the other hand
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,
men
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 were 9%
which
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, which
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 is higher than
women
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. Another interesting fact was
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men
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that men
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has
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have
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 car
trips
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 for recreation
accounted
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, which accounted
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 for over 10%
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whereas
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, whereas
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women
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 accounted for only approximately 3%. Running errands accounted for 10% and 2% for
woman
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women
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 and
men
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, respectively. The highest percentage for
purpose
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the purpose
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 of road
trips
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 for
men
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were
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was
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 work
which
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, which
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 was accounted for over 50%.
Although
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,
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apply
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women
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 accounted for 39%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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