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The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Dameliya 2

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The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Dameliya 2
The presented bar chart demonstrates the
selling
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sales
 of
books
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 across various
fictions
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fiction genres
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 between 2006 and 2010. The units are measured in
dollars
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.
Overall
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, romance
books
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 surpassed all other categories in gross earnings throughout the period, with
sales
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 exceeding 60%.
Additionally
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, mystery topics came second with a notable difference, compared to the first type,
whereas
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 the rest
fictions were lower substantially
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of the fiction was substantially lower
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.
To begin
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 with, the
sales
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 of romance
books
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 reached their peak in 2006, where
sales
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 exceeded 10000
dollars
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, followed by a drastic decline to approximately 70000$, before facing an upward trajectory during the
last
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 three years. Gross profit from Mystery
books
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also
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 peaked in 2006, and witnessed a significant drop,
then
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also
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 decreased negligibly to roughly 48000
dollars
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, but increased slightly in 2010. In terms of young adult
books
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, it remained constant during the first two years, followed by an observed downward trend,
then
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 grew gradually, reaching around 28000
dollars
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.
both Classics
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Both classics
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, sci-fi & fantasy
books
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 had
a
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apply
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fluctuating
sales
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 figures, where classics were considerably lower in
sales
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 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, dollars, sales with synonyms.
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