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The line graph below shows the percentage of spending in Turkey, from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph below shows the percentage of spending in Turkey, from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE DISTRIBUTION OF INVESTING IN TURKEY,
BWTWEEN
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BETWEEN
 1960
TO
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AND
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 2000.
OVERALL
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, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT, IN 1960, MOST SPENDING
SEEN
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WAS
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 IN
FOOD
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 AND LEAST IN
ENERGY
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.
ON THE OTHER HAND
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,
AT THE END
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 OF 2000, CLOTHING OVERTAKE THE
FOOD
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 INDUSTRY AND OTHERS SHOW DECLINE GROWTH. AFTER
ANALYSING
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ANALYISING
 THE LINE GRAPH, IT IS CLEARLY
ABUNDUTANLY
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ABUNDANTLY
 THAT, IN
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YEAR
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THE YEAR
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 1960,
FOOD
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 HOLDS THE HIGHEST PERCENTAGE WITH 35%.
WHEREAS
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,
LEISURE
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 HOLDS 20%, CLOTHES AND TRANSPORT HOLDS APPROXIMATELY EQUAL SHARE
THAT IS
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, 10% AND 9%, CORRESPONDINGLY.
MOREOVER
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ENERGY
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 REMAINS AT THE LOWEST POSITION WITH 5%
RATE
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.
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FURTHER MORE
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Furthermore
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,
IN
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in the year
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YEAR
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 1970,
FOOD
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RATE
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 SEEN DROPING DOWN FOR 4%. BUT,
LEISURE
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 , TANSPORT AND
ENERGY
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 SHARE 21%, 9% AND 4%.
HOWEVER
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, CLOTHING WILL SLIGHLTY INCRESAED UPTO 3%. IN ADIITION, IN
YEAR
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 1980 AND 1990,
FOOD
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,TRANSPORTAION,
ENERGY
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 AND
LEISURE
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 SHOWED DRASTICALLY DECLINE
RATE
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.
ALTHOUGH
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 , CLOTHING TRENDS ROSE
RAPIDLLY
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RAPIDLY
.
IN
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In the year
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YEAR
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 2000,
FOOD
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 FOLLOWED THE PATTERN OF DECLINE.
ALSO
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, OTHER THREE
SOURCE
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SOURCES
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, LIKE
TRNASPORT
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TRANSPORT
,
ENERGY
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 AND
LEISURE
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ALSO
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 SHOWS DECREASED
RATE
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. SIGNIFICANTLY, CLOTHING SHOWS IMMERGING PATTERNS AND LEADS TO TOTAL SPENDING OVER THE
YEAR
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, energy, year, leisure, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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