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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

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Two pie charts are given. The former shows the percentage of
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the world
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world
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world's forests
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forest
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 in five countries,
wheares
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 the latter gives data on the percentage of
timber
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 in each region.
Overall
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, Africa has the largest forested area but the smallest proportion of
timber
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, which is mainly produced in North and South
America
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.
On the other hand
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,
Asia
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 accounts for the smallest share of
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the world
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world
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world's forests
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forest
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. Starting from
world
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 forests, Africa has the most significant proportion of
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world's
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the world's
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forest
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forests
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, at 27%,
while
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Asia
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 accounts for only 14%. A quarter of the
world
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's
forest
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in
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 in North
America
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,
whereas
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 South
America
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 and Europe are at 16% and 18% respectively. Turning to
timber
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, North
America
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 has by far the largest share, at 30%, followed by South
America
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, which stands at 23%.
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Even
 though it has the largest forested area, Africa is responsible for only the 9% of
timber
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 produced.
Finally
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, Europe and
Asia
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 have a
similiar
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similar
 share of
timber
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. Europe stands at 20%, and
Asia
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 at 18%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, forest, timber, america, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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