Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Angsa

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Angsa

IELTS Writing Task Chart for Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Angsa

The map illustrates two possible locations for a new shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

This

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report aims to summarise the key trends, significant comparisons and notable changes highlighted in the data.

Overall

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site

Use synonyms

1 is located in the

north

Replace the word

northern

part of the town,

while

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site

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situated

Verb problem

is situated

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in the eastern

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part.

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Both sites are accessible by roads, but

the

Correct pronoun usage

they

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differ in the proximity to areas.

Site

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1 is located in the north of Brandfield, outside the city centre. It is relatively close to the golf course and park.

Site

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1 is

also

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near the housing estate, which is located in the

north

Replace the word

northern

part of the area.

In addition

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, the

site

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is close to

railway

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the railway

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and

road

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the road

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, making it easy to reach from the surrounding areas.

Site

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on the other hand

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, is situated in the

east

Replace the word

eastern

part of Brandfield and is surrounded by the industrial estate. It is

also

Linking Words

close to

road

Add an article

the road

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and railway, making it relatively accessible.

Furthermore

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, the city centre is near

Change preposition

apply

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site

Use synonyms

2, which is a significant feature.

Overall

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, both sites are suitable and accessible for residents.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words site with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

shopping mall
city planners
site
residential area
access
customers
parking
space
central
foot traffic
community
engagement
schools
parks
local

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