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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where revelant.

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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where revelant.
The bar chart illustrastes about proportion of how often fast
food
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ate
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is eaten
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 by
americans
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Americans
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 between 2003 and 2013.
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,the chart shows
number
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the number
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 of
fluctuacations
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fluctuations
 with some more
noticable
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noticeable
 points. The trend of frequency were similer in catergery of everyday and never
comsumers
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consumers
.
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 reached to it,s peak percentage in 2006 and 2013
in
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,
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 once a week and once or twice a month
repectivily
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respectively
. To start with,on
everyday
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an everyday
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 basis
below
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, below
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 the 5% people went to fast
food
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 restaurants in
year
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 2003,2006,2013. which
was
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apply
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slightly declined every
year
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.
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, more
fluctucations
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fluctuations
 were noticed in the percentage of whose ate in restaurants several times a week. In 2003, almost 17% of people were witnessed. which
rised
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rose
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 to 20% in 2006
and
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, and
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 in
final
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the final
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year
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 2013 the figure again
droped
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dropped
 to near 17%.In 2003, extream percentage of individuals went once a week
encounter
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to encounter
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 at 31%.
This
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 went to
it's
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its
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 peak at aproximatley at 33% in 2006 and after that
dicreased
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decreased
 to less
then
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 30%. Shift to once or twice a month,in
initial
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the initial
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year
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year,
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 the figures were almost
same
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the same
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around
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, around
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 30% in comparisation of up mentioned catergery , which fall downward 5% in 2006.In 2013, the value
siginificant
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significantly
 reached to it's hieast level
just
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, just
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 like the proportion of
whose
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people who
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 consumed fast
food
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 weekly in 2006.More than 10% residents of
america intaked
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America ate
 fast
food
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few
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a few
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 times in 2003.15% of them ate in 2006 and 2013.only 5% of
population
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the population
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 never tried fast
food
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 in 2003 , which
dicreased
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decreased
 in
following
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the following
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 years to essitimately 4%.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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