The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how the process of making soft cheese is carried out in a factory, which involves the use of various equipment.

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, the process has a number of different stages

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with mixing between water and milk and ending with cooling.

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, these steps involve combining water and milk. When the mixture meets the required standards,

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they cool it with salt through a thick liquid

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5

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for 2

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. After that, the mixture is contained and fermented in a tank

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around 35

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for 2

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from liquid to thick liquid. The next step takes place when the mixture is steamed and evaporated to approximately 100

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for 8

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. Once the final step has been completed, the product will cool

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through thick liquid and a mix of

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5

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for 8

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, which will lead to

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out soft cheese

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and

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waste water.