The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The given maps illustrate how the

Petland

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Coastal

Town

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have changed between 1950 and 2007.

Overall

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, it can clearly be seen that there are many

transformation

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transformations

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in the

town

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over the period of time. In 1950, a huge

of

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area of

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grassland

was dominating

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dominated

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the district,

while

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in 2007, there was only one green

area

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left, which was a park. In 1950,

Petland

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was quite and there were only

few

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a few

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buildings.

This

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district had an industrial

area

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located on the West of the

town

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, and a car park

build

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built

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on the East side of

this

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district. Regarding the transformation

happened

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that happened

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in 2007,

Petland

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have changed drastically.

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with, the industrial

area

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was being demolished

,

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apply

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and replaced by a multi-storey car park

as well as

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shops.

In

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this

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year,

Petland

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had numerous shopping buildings, one cinema, a swimming pool, a residential

area

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, and a complex of apartments.

Furthermore

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, a

yatch

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yacht

marina

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also

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was also

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constructed on the sea

that

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apply

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located

on the North

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north

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of

this

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town

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.