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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provide information about the layout of two different designs for a conference
room
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.
Overall
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, a majority of the design is similar, except for the location of
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podium
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the podium
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 and
provision
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the provision
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 of food.
Moreover
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, there are additional seating arrangements in
plan
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 B. In
plan
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 A, there is an entrance at the north eastern side of the
room
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,
whereas
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 a
podium
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on
Verb problem
is on
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 the northwestern
part
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. A
white board
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whiteboard
 is provided next to the
podium
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to
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on
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 its right side. Tables with chairs have been placed on the east and west side on one in between
in
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apply
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them. The
southern most
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southernmost
part
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 of the
room
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 has
table
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a table
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, which offers morning refreshments. Turning to
plan
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 B,
location
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the location
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 of the entrance is similar to that of
plan
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 A. The
podium
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 is now shifted in almost central
part
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 of the
room
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, with a whiteboard to its north.
Similarly
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, arrangements of morning refereshments is changed to
northwestern
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the northwestern
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part
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 of the
room
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. Placement of tables remains
same
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the same
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, but chairs are placed on
its
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apply
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both sides.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, podium, plan, part with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular
  • intimate
  • focused setting
  • versatile
  • collaborative work
  • whiteboard
  • projector
  • amenities
  • refreshment area
  • storage cabinets
  • breakout areas
  • dividers
  • group discussions
  • interactive sessions
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