The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented line graph illustrates the number of pupils from Vietnam pursuing education in three different countries, France, Russia and America, from 2000 to 2015.

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, an upward trend

were

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seen over these 15 years;

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, America was the predominant country,

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Russia ranked the lowest position. Regarding the highest figure, America accounted for the

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position in the chart

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its figure started from 1,5

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students at the outset.

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, the country experienced an upswing during the next 10 years, and the number of individuals

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to 3

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. From 2010 to 2015,

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was a dramatic increase and peaked at 5

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millions

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. France stood at the

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position at the beginning, followed by a drop of 1 million in 2005. The value for the country levelled off at 2,5 from 2005 to 2010. By the end of the period, it had edged up by 4,5

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. The same pattern was applied by Russia. There was a significant decrease during the 10 years , from 3

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to 1,8

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.

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, it was

stabilized

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and witnessed a considerable growth by 2015, reaching 2,5

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