Some people believe that students should study only subjects that are useful for their future careers. Others believe that students should study a wide range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Your answer is not finished. Write about both views: why some people want career subjects only, and why others want many subjects. Then clearly say what you think.
Give one main idea and one clear example for each view. For example, career subjects can help students get work, while art, history, and science can help students learn many useful skills.
Add a short ending that repeats your own view in clear words.
Make a clear plan: introduction, one paragraph for the first view, one paragraph for the second view, your view, and an ending.
The first sentence has an error: do not write “There is no doubt that these days.” Write “There is no doubt that people have different views about this issue.”
Do not join many full ideas with commas. Use full stops and simple link words such as “First”, “However”, “For example”, and “In my view”.
Finish the last line. “In terms of positive I think mu” is not clear, so the reader cannot follow your point.
You show that you understand the two sides of the topic.
You try to introduce the topic before giving your ideas.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general