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The table below show daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004

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The table below show daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004
The table compares four countries in terms of daily
oil
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 production, namely Nigeria,
Chad
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,
Congo
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 and
Somalia
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 , between 2000 and 2004.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest
figure
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 was shown in
Congo
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,
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and
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the lowest
index
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 was shown in
Somalia
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. As the table shows, the daily
oil
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 produced in
Congo
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 was the biggest
figure
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 at 275,000
barrels
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, but the lowest
index
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 was shown in
Somalia
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 at 5,000
barrels
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 in 2000. Nigeria indicated 205,000
barrels
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.
Chad
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's daily
oil
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 production was 0
barrels
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. In 2001, the highest
figure
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 was indicated in
Congo
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 at 234,000
barrels
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, but the lowest
index
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 was shown in
Somalia
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 at 8,000
barrels
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.
Congo
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 indicated 234,000
barrels
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 of
oil
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.
Chad
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 remained stable
index
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 of 0
barrels
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. In 2003, the biggest
figure
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 was shown in
Congo
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 at 215,000
barrels
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, but the lowest
index
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 was demonstrated in
Chad
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 at 8,000
barrels
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. Regarding
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 the biggest
figure
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 indicated was Nigeria at 213,000
barrels
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, but the lowest indexes were
Chad
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 and
Somalia
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 at 50.000
barrels
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 in 2004.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, chad, congo, somalia, figure, index, barrels with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicated" was used 4 times.
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