The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The four pie charts provide information about the
population
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of different ages between the
years
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2000
to
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and
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2050 and
its
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their
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estimated increase in Yemen and Italy.
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, the percentage of 15 to
55
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55-year-olds
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years
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old was higher in Yemen at the beginning of the period
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, as
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60
years
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old was the lowest
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of the period.
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the figure of 15 to 59 year old people was
more
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higher
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as
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as,
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the least
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population
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populated age group
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was 0 to 14
years
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. In detail, the percentage of
youth
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the youth
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population
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was 3.6% in 2000 in Yemen
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the projected
population
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was 5.6% in 2050.
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, 15 to
59
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59-year-old
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years
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old individuals
ratio
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apply
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was 46.3 per cent in
2000
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2000,
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as the forecasted
population
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decline
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declined
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significantly to 37% in 2050. As for Italy, the ratio of 15 to
59
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59-year-olds
years
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old was 61.6
percent
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per cent
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in
2000
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2000,
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as more people died in the
upcoming
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following
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years
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. The ratio of both
and
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males and
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female
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females
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will fall remarkably
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health issues.
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, the number of teenagers was higher in 2000 to about 14.3%
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population
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the population
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goes down in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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