The two bar charts show the area of forest lost and the area of new forest planted in six world regions, in 1990 and 2015.

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The two bar charts show the area of

forest

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lost and the area of new

forest

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planted in six world

regions

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, in 1990 and 2015. The unit is

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million

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a million

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hectares

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Overall

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forest

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loss was much greater than planting in both years

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this

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was especially clear in South America and Africa.

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loss

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losses

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fell in all

regions

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over time,

while

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planting rose in all of them. South America lost the most

forest

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. It lost 4.5

million

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hectares

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in 1990 and 2.9

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million in

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2015. Africa was

next,

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and it dropped from 4.1 to 3.4

million

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hectares

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. The other

regions

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lost much less. Europe and Oceania lost the least. For planting, Asia and Europe were the leaders. Asia rose from 1.5 to 2.8

million

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hectares

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, and Europe rose from 1.8 to 2.2

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million hectares.

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This

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meant both

regions

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had a net gain in 2015. South America and Africa planted little, so they still had a large net loss.

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Oct 9, 2026

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

154 words

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The two bar charts show the area of forest lost and the area of new forest planted in six world regions, in 1990 and 2015.

Nowadays, more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. what problems could this situation cause? what solutions you can suggest?

Traffic congestion is a major problem in most large cities, nowadays. What are the causes of traffic congestion in cities? what could the government do to reduce this problem?

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.