the pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

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of profession types between

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in the UK

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in 1992. One striking feature is that clerical and related jobs came first for women, and the opposite was true for managerial and professional employment. General labourers were the overwhelming area for men,

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managerial and professional occupations

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category. Female was the superior in clerical or related, other manual and craft or similar. The remaining ones belong to male namely, general labourers, managerial and professional, and other non-manual. On the one hand, general labourers had the highest

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on the general scale

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amounted 29% for females and 36% for men. The other

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was craft or similar

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includes a large part

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each group. It

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for 27% and 26% respectively

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and male.

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, clerical or related fields overcame the other professions with 31% for females

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was only 6% in male. The same phenomenon was experienced in men’s side

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other non-manual jobs accounted for a high level like 29%, despite

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metric was 3% in the women's group. Other manual jobs accounted for 9% for

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and 6% for

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. The lowest figure was managerial and professional for both

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with 2% and 1% respectively.