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The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020

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The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020
The bar charts compare the
proportion
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people
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of people
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 employed in
agriculture
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,
industry
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 and
services
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 in three
countries
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 in 1980 and 2020.
Overall
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, the
proportion
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 of
employment
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 in
services
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 increased in all three
countries
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 and accounted for the largest share in
countries
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 A
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and
 C by 2020.
By contrast
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,
agriculture
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 declined in all
countries
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,
although
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 it remained the largest
emploment
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employment
 sector in
country
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 B. In
country
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 A, the share of
employment
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 in
services
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 rose approximately from 45% to 55%.
Industry
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 remained the second-largest sector, despite a slight decrease from 30% to around 28%. Meanwhile, the
proportion
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 of
employed
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people employed
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 in
agriculture
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 fell from 20% to approximately 12%. In
country
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 C,
services
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 already accounted for the majority of
employment
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 in 1980, at around 70%, before rising to 80% in 2020.
Agricuture
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Agriculture
 represented the smallest
proportion
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 in both years,
while
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industry
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 declined marginally from 30% to 25%.
On the other hand
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,
country
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 B showed a different pattern.
Agriculture
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 accounted for the largest share of
employment
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 in 1980, at 55%, before declining to around 45% in 2020.
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, the
proportion
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 employed in
services
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 grew substantially from 25% to 42%.
Industry
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also
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 experiences considerable growth, doubling from 20% to approximately 40% over the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, agriculture, industry, services, countries, employment, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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