The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The line graph illustrates the

number

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of

teenagers

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who ate various fast foods

such

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as

pizza

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, fish and chips and

hamburgers

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in Australia over the

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from 1975 to 2000.

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, it is apparent that the

pizza

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and

hamburgers

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were more popular throughout the

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,

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the fish and chips were least popular in Australia. Turning to the

pizza

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and

hamburgers

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, the highest

number

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of

teenagers

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ate Italian foods

at the end

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of the

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.

Pizza

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began with

less

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a small

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number

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around 5

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teenagers

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in 1975, followed by

,

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apply

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considerably increased approximately 15

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number of

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apply

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teenagers

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like

pizza

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in 1980.The

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steadily climbed with 60

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number of

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apply

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teenagers

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consumed

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consuming

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pizza

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in 1990. Before the trend rose

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to

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80

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number in1995

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in 1995

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. At

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of the

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with

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, with

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similar

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a similar

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in 2000. Meanwhile,

Hamburgers

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started around 8

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in1957

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in 1957

. The

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countinued upsurge roughly 85

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ate

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eating

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hamburgers

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. Before slightly

fell

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falling

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the trend, reaching

peak

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a peak

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at

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of

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100

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in 1995.The

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similar

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is similar

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to 2000. Turning to fish and chips, it was the most popular at starting

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with 100

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consumed

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consuming

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fried chicken.

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Then

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slightly decreased approximately 85

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approximately 85 teenagers were slightly decreased

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teenagers

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.

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, the

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jumped roughly 94

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, before the

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dropped

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40

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liked

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hamburgers

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.