The chart below shows the average number of annual visitors to five types of cultural venues in London in 2015 and 2019.

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of annual visitors in millions

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to five sectors of cultural venues in London between the year 2015 and the year 2019.

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, museums maintained the highest proportion throughout the period

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in addition

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, art galleries, theaters and concert halls obtained a moderately increasing relationship.

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libraries had a fall and declined

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of the period.

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, museums secured a

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of 5.5

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visitors

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in 2015.

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, the

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rose to 6

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in 2019.

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, the proportions of art galleries and theatres

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showed 4.2

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and 4

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, respectively, in 2015. It

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climbed steadily

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to 4.5

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and 4.2

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, respectively, in 2019.

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, libraries were accounted

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3

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at the beginning.

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libararies

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of library visitors had dropped to 2.5

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in 2019.