The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE GIVEN DATA ILLUSTRATES THE PRODUCTION OF
FABRIC
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FROM BAMBOO TREE. IT INVOLVES EIGHT STEPS.
OVERALL
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IT IS CLEAR THAT
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AT THE BEGINNING PLANTATIONS ARE REQUIRED ,
WHILE
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IT END UP WITH WEAVING OF
FABRIC
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. LOOKING FIRST AT BAMBOO, THE FIRST STEP INVOLVES PLANTATION DURING SPRING, FOLLOWED BY HARVESTING DURING THE AUTUMN SEASON. AFTER THAT, BAMBOO IS CUT INTO STRIPS WITH THE HELP OF A SHARP CUTTER BLADE.
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, THE STRIPS WERE CRUSHED TO FORM A LIQUID PULP. NEXT STEP CONSISTS OF FILTERATION , IN WHICH FILTER PAPER WAS USED , WHICH SEPARATES LONG FIBRES FROM LIQUID AND FORMS A SOFTENED FIBRE. TURNING TOWARDS THE REMAINING PROCESS, THE SOFTEN FIBER MOVES TO THE NEXT STEP BY ADDING WATER AND AMINE OXIDE
IN
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TO
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IT .
THEN
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, IT SPIN TO MAKE YARN.
Furthermore
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, TO MAKE
FABRIC
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FROM IT, IT WAS WEAVED AND
THIS
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LEADS TO MANUFACTURATION OF A
FABRIC
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, WHICH FORMED T-SHIRTS AND SHOCKS AT THE VERY END.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fabric with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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