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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the
expanditure
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expenditure
 of three items: Food/Drink/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education. In five different nations
for
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 a consumer in 2002. The
date
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 are given in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear
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 the table that Turkey had the highest expense in all nations and categories.
In addition
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, the Food/Drink/Tobacco category was the most
spend
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spent
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whereas
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 the Leisure/Education the least
spend
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spent
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According to
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 countries, Sweden has the lowest
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expenditure
, which was the total of
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 categories
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 a quarter. And the second most
spend
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spent
 on after Turkey, was Ireland
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approximently
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approximately
 accounted for 36%. And the rest of the
expense
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expenses
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 of countries ranged from 28.56% and 24.39%. In terms of categories, the consumer most
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on
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Food/Drink/Tobacco, but the consumer did not spend that much on Leisure/Education.
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, the expanse in Clothing/Footwear were convienet
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 the figures were relatively similar across all countries.
As well as
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 the third category
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 the
expense
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expenses
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 were under 5% .

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