The charts below show the percentage of electricity used by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.

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The charts below show the percentage of electricity used by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of electricity used by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
The given pie charts compare the proportion of electricity used by eight sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the percentage of other metals increased slightly over the
period
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whereas
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manufacturing and aluminium experienced a downward trend throughout the
period
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Residentials
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Residential
were the largest sector in both periods,
while
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agriculture and transport were virtually absent in both spans. In detail, agriculture and transport stood at 1% in both periods, respectively.
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, the figure for mining remained unchanged at 9% by the end of the timeframe. The share of
commercial
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sector accounted for 23% in 2007 but remained unaltered by 2010. The remaining four sectors were aluminium, residential, other metals, and manufacturing.
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, residential accounted for the largest share among these sectors at 28% in 2007 and remained unchanged by the end of the
period
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Similarly
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, aluminium and manufacturing each had at 13% in 2007, but
then
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there was a slight decline to 11% and 9% by 2010.
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, other metals increased steadily by 6 percentage points, from 12% to 18% over a 3-year
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percent
  • percentage
  • share
  • part
  • portion
  • sector
  • home
  • homes
  • household
  • industry
  • services
  • other
  • increase
  • rise
  • grow
  • go up
  • decrease
  • fall
  • drop
  • decline
  • go down
  • change
  • change in
  • shift
  • stable
  • constant
  • remains
  • slight
  • small
  • big
  • large
  • sharp
  • steady
  • trend
  • pattern
  • compare
  • compare with
  • in comparison
  • 2007
  • 2010
  • overall
  • describe
  • electricity
  • use
  • consumed
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