You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well! I am writing

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email to admire one of your employees, whose great service surprised me at your Walmart

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Sunday. When I was shopping for my groceries, I realised I had left my wallet at home. As I arrived

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, one of your staff member Mrs Jane Kohli, noticed my stress and offered me help.

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, she helped me to locate the things which I couldn't find, and she suggested some discount offers on those products. I was very thankful to her for putting all the items aside

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I grabbed my wallet from home.

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, I returned in ten minutes and completed that trasection.

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, I will shop at your store regularly and recommend it to my family and friends. It would be great if you could pass my thanks to her and give praise to her in front of everyone. Thank you for your time. Yours faithfully, Zarana

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Oct 18, 2026

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task response

Give a little more detail about why the staff member’s help was so special. For example, say how her calm and kind way made you feel.

task response

Use a more direct opening, such as: “I am writing to praise a member of your staff.” This makes the aim clear at once.

coherence and cohesion

Your letter has a clear order: the problem, the help, and what you will do next. Keep this clear plan.

coherence and cohesion

Put the help from Mrs Kohli in one smooth group. You can join short ideas with words such as “First”, “Then”, and “As a result”.

coherence and cohesion

Check small word forms and spelling so the links between ideas are easy to follow. For example, write “staff member” and “transaction”.

task response

You cover all main parts of the letter: the problem at the shop, the help you got, and your plan to shop there again and tell others.

coherence and cohesion

The letter is easy to follow, with a clear start, main part, and polite ending.

coherence and cohesion

You use helpful link words, such as “Also”, “Moreover”, and “As a result”, to show how the events are connected.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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